Naughty Girl

Carl saw her when she walked into the bar with a man who looked old enough to be her dad. When the man threw his drink in her face, Carl had to do something about it, and he did. That's how Carl met DeeDee, a beautiful woman that he wants to get to know better. Little does he know that she's a submissive and looking for that special someone to be her Master and to love her. As Carl gets DeeDee to tell her story, he begins acting it out with her and finding that Dominate side of himself. She tells him of her former Master, who has died, and their life together and how he had told a friend of his, Turk, that if anything happened to him then DeeDee was to belong to Turk. Carl can't believe that anyone would hand off another person like they were property. When DeeDee disappears, Carl goes searching for clues at her apartment and finds TURK is written on the bathroom mirror. Carl goes looking for Turk and DeeDee and finds himself in the hands of Mistress Gloria. Mistress Gloria wants to train Carl to be a slave, but he has other ideas. There is no way he will submit to her, he has to find a way out and rescue DeeDee before she is lost to him forever. Will he be able to or will Mistress Gloria break him? Read this exciting story to find out that and more.

J.W. McKenna has written a story that is not only exciting, but is very hot. The scenes between Carl and DeeDee are erotic, loving and will have the reader looking for something to cool themselves down with. The scene where Carl takes DeeDee to the mall to shop for clothes. I think it shows how trust in a BDSM relationship is very important. DeeDee knows, even though Carl is pushing her limits, he wont let anything bad happen to her, or take it too far. The story has some intense moments, but that only draws the reader further into the story line. This a recommended read for anyone who enjoys a good, loving BDSM story.

Reviewed by: Donna